The second version.
Personally, i felt that the previous version has too much information to send across. I guess going simple will actually make it less cluttered and eventually, a neater piece of work.
Thru this piece, i hope to send across the message of breaking free from this urban phenomena that we are all being slowly consumed into.
In the foreground is a myriad of buildings, structures and objects. A messy and cramped up environment.
Thus, the hand, symbolises the "human element" is reaching out and hopefully, escape from this clautrophobic situation.
Comments from the class included that the overlay of bricks seem a tad too heavy. Kind of shifted the overall balance of the work.
Will continue to touch up and for now its work-in-progress.. =)
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